(Puppy Love by Francisco Sionil Jose)
(Critique Paper)
Submitted by: Jonaly P. Sta. Maria
Grade 12: ABM (B)
2:00 - 2:50 p.m.
Monday - Friday
October 18, 2017
Submitted to: Ms. Priscilla M. Agaton
“Love that is not destined”
The story Puppy Love by Francisco Sionil Jose was written in 1998. At first I don’t want to read the story because I know that its genre is love and I really hate love stories. Some may say that I’m bitter that’s why I don’t like it but my real reason is that it is a common genre. I am tired with this kind of story because it is always the same that’s why when I’ve heard that we are going to read a love story I am not interested but I still read it because it is required and as I read it make me change my feeling about love story because this story is different from all the stories that I watched and read.
The story begins by introducing the main character Jacobo Salcedo and also known as Jake after he was introduced he narrates the happenings in his life and the people around him who really has a big impact in his life and one of this is Gina. The story mainly revolves around Jake and Gina. At the very young age Jake is already attracted to Gina and later on Gina became attracted to Jake but the both of them don’t know that they have feelings for each other because no one confess their true feelings. There are a lot of conflicts here in the story. First, the conflict about being poor and being rich. It is obvious that in the story if you read it that the conflict is about the social status because Gina is rich and Jake is thinking that there is no hope to end up with her. Second, the war happened, it is the reason why Jake and Gina became away from each other. Third and last, they never confess the feelings they have for each other but for me the real conflict here and the climax is that when they meet each other in the Bayside Club but Jake didn’t confess or reveal his real identity to Gina because she doesn’t recognize him and that’s the conflict because the chance that he has flew away because he didn’t reveal himself and Gina doesn’t know that he is her childhood friend and long lost love. The story is a bit irritating because I hate the attitude of Jake he is wasting his time and chances so that Gina will be his forever. The story ends up tragically because the both parties married different persons. Where Jake married Jenny, according to the story Jake married her because she looks like Gina but as time goes by he begins to love her wife if Jake has a happy life, Gina doesn’t because her husband is not faithful to her and she killed him that’s why she ends up in the prison. At the first part of the story I really thought that the twist will be the same with the other love story where the boy and the girl faced a lot of circumstances but in the end they end up with each other and live happy ever after but in this story it is different and I could really say that not all love stories have a happy ending.
The main characters in the story is Jacobo Salcedo (Jake) and Gina Garcia because the story revolves around the two of them and the supporting characters are Lito Garcia, Carlos Cobello and Jenny. The parents of Lito and Gina are also introduced and they are Don Antonio and Doña Alicia. Jake came from a very poor family but due to his hardworking and motivated by Gina and also the situation of his life he become rich and a successful lawyer. His father raised fighting cocks and drunkard and his mother is selling fish and salt in the market, she also sold jueteng bets. Gina one of the daughter of a rich family that owns a big hacienda in San Jacinto. Has a brownish hair, dark eyes, nice voice and mestiza. She’s fluent in speaking Spanish language and loves reading novels specifically Wuthering Heights. Lito Garcia is the brother of Gina and the bestfriend of Jake and because of him Jake and Gina became closed to each other. Don Antonio has a lot of mistresses and illegitimate children while Doña Alicia is always in the room. Carlos Cobello is the friend of Jake and help him to have a job and became successful. Jenny Salcedo is the wife of Jake. He married her because she looks like Gina but later on he learned to love her.
Jake is a pessimist person because he is always thinking the negative side of every situation just like when he is attracted to Gina when they are still young he used to think that they will not end up together because Gina is rich and he is poor and when they meet again in the Bayside Club there’s a line in the story saying “she might not even the Gina of my childhood in spite of the many clues that I had already unearthed” he is still doubting that maybe she is not Gina his long lost love. Also he doesn’t have the guts to be a man because he is not brave enough to tell Gina his real identity and feelings earlier before the things messed up. For Gina, I think she’s just a typical Filipino woman that dreaming about a perfect relationship, a relationship that is faithful and loyal to each other. A Filipino woman because as she grew up she never let other man touch her body and she is not in a hurry, she is always waiting for Jake to do the first move and always overthinking. Both have a psychological problem that’s why they don’t end up with each other because they keep on thinking and thinking about negative things and they didn’t even talk about their past that’s why they are not enlightened maybe if Jake use the chance he has when he met Gina in the Bayside they can live happily.
The setting in San Jacinto is really perfect in the first part of the story because in terms of my experiences, San Jacinto is a province because there are fields and the jobs of people here is raising cocks and selling fishes which means it has a particular part there that they can go fishing and in provinces I know that there no discriminations because when I went to our province everyone knows the name of their neighbors and they don’t even mind if they are poor or rich and the other setting is in Manila is very appropriate in the plot of the story because we all know that a lot of people in the province move to Manila to have a job and to become successful and it have a lot of club so that girls or woman rather, who didn’t finish their studies still have something order for them to live and for some instance, I think most of the woman who didn’t finish their studies will choose to become hostess because the money here is easy to gain and the story happened before and after the colonization of Japanese.
The story was written using the first person point of view because the character is just narrating the things that he experiences in his life. Not all the information is revealed but I understand it because as my teacher said that in stories not all the information is given that’s why we need to use our critical thinking and to read between the line to really understand what the story is conveying to us and it is easier to understand a story if it uses the first person point of view because I can relate to it whenever I read the word “I” in the story I can feel that I am the persona and because it is the person who talks about his experiences he can narrate it properly and systematically. Maybe if the story is not written using the first person point of view it will be difficult for me to understand because me as a student I am always writing in the first person point of view because I can easily say what I want to say that’s why one time when our teacher said that we should right in the third person point of view I really find it hard making one and if the story is not written in the first person point of view it will be hard to relate to it.
There are a lot of things that comes into my mind when I’m reading the story. First, the story is all about grabbing every chance and opportunity that comes to our life because in the story because Jake didn’t value that chance and opportunity he had when he and Gina meets again their story became so complicated so I can say that maybe if Jake grab it different story will happen. Second, life goes on because it is said in the story that Jake and Gina faced a lot of circumstances but they still managed to live and survive so I can say that the message of the story is that even though we have a lot of problems and dramas in life, life still goes on and we shouldn’t lose hope and trust in ourselves. Third and last, when you love someone you should fight for it because in the story Jake keeps on thinking that he and Gina are not compatible because he is poor that’s why he doesn’t have the guts to confess and because of this a lot of conflicts occurred in the story so before it’s too late we need to confess even if we don’t know if he or she will accept or reject our feelings at least we tried and we have nothing to regret for in the future. The three of this can be the theme of the story but the most appropriate theme is “Nothing Last Forever” because as the story entitled as Puppy Love it means loving at a very young age but it will not last forever. You may love the person today but tomorrow you not love him or her anymore and that’s what happened to the story Jake and Gina finally let go the feelings they have for each other and married different persons. Jake finally learned to love Jenny his wife and Gina loves her husband but due to her so much love and to the novels she read she killed her husband because of too much pain she felt and because she is still imagining to have a perfect relationship just like what she read in the novels.
The story is a little tragic for me because I can’t imagine what love can truly do to people. Just like in the story when Gina cut the private part of her husband because for me that’s not the right thing to do. In reality people tend to forgive the love of their life even though their partner betrayed them but as a whole I really like the story because I can simply say that I can really relate to this and it is really happening in real life and I hope I could know what happened next in the story after Gina knew that Jake is her long lost love because I am a little confused what happened next but I know that this story is an open ended story so every reader can imagine what will be the ending and for me the ending will be after Gina knew that it is Jake she cried and Jake help her so that she can start a new life and she accepted and moved on already and she has a happy and better life just like what Jake has.